Really cute melody, but it ends a bit too soon :(
Really cute melody, but it ends a bit too soon :(
I think the beginning was a bit weak with just the arpeggios, but that tempo change at the end really made the track stand out to me. Lives up to the name.
This track could definitely use a bit of compression to trim down the peaks and make the melody stand out more. Some kick drum sidechaining would also be good if you're into that EDM sound. Besides that, this is both short and sweet.
The beginning reminds me a lot of the PinOut Theme, though that might just be coincidence. The melody feels slightly out of place, like it belongs in some scary mansion theme, but it doesn't sound bad at all.
I like the interesting chord progression going on, though the lead synth is a bit too piercing for my taste.
Reminds me a lot of the Super Mario Galaxy level select theme. I know it's part of the gimmick but I do wish this was a bit longer.
Very experimental syncopation going on, but this sounds really pretty <3
Sounds a bit empty at the beginning and end, but the melody is pretty nice.
Thank you for the feedback! I must admit i'm not the greatest when it comes to introductions and outros, but i'm always trying to improve. Glad you liked it!
It's a really nice melody, though it definitely feels a bit empty. A bit of reverb and delay goes a long way.
Yo thanks. I kinda rushed this out of all the other songs, bit I can definitely improve it
The intro would fit perfectly in a game like NSMBW. The drums could definitely use a bit of "punch" but I love the vibe this is going for.
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